Today I read three poems from three different poets. One was called Bleed by Cindy Thomas it was about a girl who cuts herself to feel real and ends up bleeding too much and killing her self. The second poem was called lil man by Lori Pike and it was about the ladies sick son getting over his illness. The third poem was call You've become a part of me by an anonomous poet and it was about wanting a girl and the eventually he got her and he feels she has become a part of him.
The three poem that I read were good poems the first one is Little Man that poem was deep cause it was about how that lady son was freena die and she wrote a poem about how her son made it through and is recovering from the disease and with that gave her more strength and love for her son. The bleeding was an interesting poem to it was a deep poem also It told about how they cut there wrist and it was to late to go back on what they did and they died . From the pulp was a story poem about a diif. life style that he wanted to write about that others probaly havent experienced.
Poem Review
On the website www.writersintouch.com I found three very interesting poems.
The first one was called BLEED by Cindy Thomas. It was about a person who found pleasure in cutting themself and one day cut to far and died. The second poem was called Little Man by Lori Pike It was about her sick son who battled out a sickness or disease. Finally, the third poem was by an anonymous author and it was about him wanted to go further with an underage girl who wanted him just as bad.
On the website www.writersintouch.com I found three very interesting poems.
The first one was called BLEED by Cindy Thomas. It was about a person who found pleasure in cutting themself and one day cut to far and died. The second poem was called Little Man by Lori Pike It was about her sick son who battled out a sickness or disease. Finally, the third poem was by an anonymous author and it was about him wanted to go further with an underage girl who wanted him just as bad.
I Am by: Nakkita Tanzana
I choose to write about this poem because we had just wrote a "I am" in one of my classes at school. My teacher had gave the class a structure of how, I presumed, it supposed to go; then when I read Nakkita's poem I realized that there is no standard why for this poem.
Unlovable by: English Indian
I like this poem because I believe that we all feel this way deep inside we we're all alone.
My Memory by: becki watson
This poem was right to the point and let you know that becki has pleasant memories.
I choose to write about this poem because we had just wrote a "I am" in one of my classes at school. My teacher had gave the class a structure of how, I presumed, it supposed to go; then when I read Nakkita's poem I realized that there is no standard why for this poem.
Unlovable by: English Indian
I like this poem because I believe that we all feel this way deep inside we we're all alone.
My Memory by: becki watson
This poem was right to the point and let you know that becki has pleasant memories.
"Open em Up" by Sadiyq Naji
I like this poem it talks about how Respect and life and how to act and how to be successful in life how to act . it talks about how he will act until he dies he carries himself it talks about how he lives in peace and doesn't start stuff
poem #2
Round and round
by the same person
I really like this one it talks about how to find your self it talks about how you have to look inside your self to find your self
its really nice
Little Man
Lorie Pike
I really like this poem it's about a lady and how she has a sick baby and how she want to hold him but she cant because he is too sick. in the end she is able to hold him because she prayed for him and he is better
I like this poem it talks about how Respect and life and how to act and how to be successful in life how to act . it talks about how he will act until he dies he carries himself it talks about how he lives in peace and doesn't start stuff
poem #2
Round and round
by the same person
I really like this one it talks about how to find your self it talks about how you have to look inside your self to find your self
its really nice
Little Man
Lorie Pike
I really like this poem it's about a lady and how she has a sick baby and how she want to hold him but she cant because he is too sick. in the end she is able to hold him because she prayed for him and he is better
The Animal Within Me
By: Rick Storey
Summary: This poem is about the author having the erge to fight. The author fights many people and beat them up, but another person end up beating the author up. So, the has finally gained respect for others.
Heart's Desire
By: Katherine Sudy
Summary: The author's desire is to make everything better than what it is. She want to take away all the negative and bring in the positive.
Writer's Lament
By: Lori Pike
Summary: You should treat everyone the way that you want to be treated. Treat others with respect.
By: Rick Storey
Summary: This poem is about the author having the erge to fight. The author fights many people and beat them up, but another person end up beating the author up. So, the has finally gained respect for others.
Heart's Desire
By: Katherine Sudy
Summary: The author's desire is to make everything better than what it is. She want to take away all the negative and bring in the positive.
Writer's Lament
By: Lori Pike
Summary: You should treat everyone the way that you want to be treated. Treat others with respect.
Reading this poem LITTLE MAN-by, Lori Pike was good because it make me think about my little brother. I love him so much, I even call him (DAD). His name is Devyon and he is so sweet. But just like the poem sad, he is brave and love too try new things. And reading this make me think about him.
Reading this poem THE ANIMAL WITHIN ME- by, Rick Storey made me think bout my boyfriend Lil Gerald. He love to fight and make people mad. He also love to fight. We evrn fight when he make me mad or if things isn't going his way. And this poem is about someone with anger and the meed to fight.
Reading this poem HIS INDEPENDENCE- by, Josh Goelz is good because someone is always thinking and wondering. And reading it make me think about who or what is thinking in the poem. But the person who wrote the poem had to think about this for a long time. I love how they name the poem His Independence, because there isn't alot of independent males.
Reading this poem THE ANIMAL WITHIN ME- by, Rick Storey made me think bout my boyfriend Lil Gerald. He love to fight and make people mad. He also love to fight. We evrn fight when he make me mad or if things isn't going his way. And this poem is about someone with anger and the meed to fight.
Reading this poem HIS INDEPENDENCE- by, Josh Goelz is good because someone is always thinking and wondering. And reading it make me think about who or what is thinking in the poem. But the person who wrote the poem had to think about this for a long time. I love how they name the poem His Independence, because there isn't alot of independent males.
The Darkness, by Lisa Plowman
This was mostly about losing to depression. About how you was in a dark cave and something was eatting you alive. You tried to fight back but your were to waek. You were all alone in this one and no one could hear you cry, but then you start to see a light. You fight your way to get out of the cave with all of your strengh and you finally get out.
Everlasting Life, by Patrick Wallace
This one was about you knwing that Heaven is in the sky our enen past the sky. You also know that moon and the stars also is up there still falling and crashing. When past by all of those obstacles you'll finally reached the promised land, which you will be granted Everlasting Life.
Heart's Desire, by Katherine Sudy
This one was mostly about not being selfess. Do not be mean to people and try to help them out the best way that you can. Its is saying that you can not pretending that you do not see smething going wrong. You can not just walk away from the problem because you might regret what happens to the person that you didn't help.
This was mostly about losing to depression. About how you was in a dark cave and something was eatting you alive. You tried to fight back but your were to waek. You were all alone in this one and no one could hear you cry, but then you start to see a light. You fight your way to get out of the cave with all of your strengh and you finally get out.
Everlasting Life, by Patrick Wallace
This one was about you knwing that Heaven is in the sky our enen past the sky. You also know that moon and the stars also is up there still falling and crashing. When past by all of those obstacles you'll finally reached the promised land, which you will be granted Everlasting Life.
Heart's Desire, by Katherine Sudy
This one was mostly about not being selfess. Do not be mean to people and try to help them out the best way that you can. Its is saying that you can not pretending that you do not see smething going wrong. You can not just walk away from the problem because you might regret what happens to the person that you didn't help.
<http://www.writersintouch.com/article_view.php?articleid=2031>
The Poem is Tender Love's Addiction by Laura Hostetler
Comments:... Wow. Powerful. I could really feel the love based resentment.
<http://www.writersintouch.com/article_view.php?articleid=1889>
The poem is I Am About to Lose My Peotic License by John Magee
Comments: Interesting. Very thought provoking. Though, I am unsure what neekual means.
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The poem is Black Spectre by Lorraine Lewis
Comments: Very descriptive. It really gave me a visual of the spectre and the feelings towards it.
The Poem is Tender Love's Addiction by Laura Hostetler
Comments:... Wow. Powerful. I could really feel the love based resentment.
<http://www.writersintouch.com/article_view.php?articleid=1889>
The poem is I Am About to Lose My Peotic License by John Magee
Comments: Interesting. Very thought provoking. Though, I am unsure what neekual means.
<http://www.writersintouch.com/article_view.php?articleid=949>
The poem is Black Spectre by Lorraine Lewis
Comments: Very descriptive. It really gave me a visual of the spectre and the feelings towards it.
The poem called "Unloveable" by English Indian was a very good poem, it was very interesting something that I can totally relate to because of the things I go throught in everyday life.The second poem was called "Little Man" by Lori Pike, this poem caught my eye because it talked about a mother fearing if her son was going to live or die.The third and final poem was called "Everlasting Life" by Patrick Wallace, this poem talked about life after death if you are a believer in christ. If you are than you should know that you will have everlasting life. I strongly reommend that people who are non-believers you should considered coming to know Christ. The three poems were very interesting.........
OH my god i just got my grade for this class. It iz not where its at i have a 75 and i need an 92 that is a very unobtanable goal so now im screwed and i am going to get my car taken when report cards come out. I got an 82 on my story that worked my tail off for so now i feel like doing all my work and trying hard doesn't matter. this is my senior year and this is not what i need to make the grade so bad this is and english class and i was going to be an english major i think not now i have to change my major which only took me 6 years to come up with so i guess thats it
The article Modern Diaries was very interesting. It really made me think about bloging it makes me more contious of what i say on the internet. I never knew so many people blogged. I had ever heard abut it until my teacher started this project. I have never really been one to chat of blog on the internet i don't really trust it. My mothers ex boyfriend knew how to look in on conversations that people thought were private and my m om knows how to find out everything about everybody i don't ever know why she cares. After reading the article i felt kind of shocked that the boy would write about his murder. I am scared to write about my day sometimes in fear that some crazy person will be able to link it back to me. I think that this incident should encourage every one to be a little more contious and a little more carful about what they put out online.
Think about it
The story "Thnk About It" has absolutly nothing to do with the title. The story is about this lady sitting on the beach getting drunk off Maui Woowies. She is thinking about her husband and the better times they used to have together. I didn't really understandthe story it seems like it was starting from the middle and finishing bofor the end Maybe there is a part two that i can read. Overall it was a stupid story !
It has just been made know that a young man had been bloging for some time now about how he would kill a someone. Detectives didn't find out about the thoughts of the man until it actually came true one sad evening.
It was the night of a young woman's Homecoming, a night that a many of teens anticipate. She was on her way to her high school's dance when some where along the way she encountered the same male that has been planning this event for a very long time. Her evening soon came to a tragic end when the male initiated his operation.
While executing his plan, the gentleman brutally murdered this young woman and burned her lifeless body inside of her car.
This whole event could have been avoided if only someone would have listened...
Til Tomorrow...
Na~Na
It was the night of a young woman's Homecoming, a night that a many of teens anticipate. She was on her way to her high school's dance when some where along the way she encountered the same male that has been planning this event for a very long time. Her evening soon came to a tragic end when the male initiated his operation.
While executing his plan, the gentleman brutally murdered this young woman and burned her lifeless body inside of her car.
This whole event could have been avoided if only someone would have listened...
Til Tomorrow...
Na~Na
Man i really dont know about blog cause this the first time I ever really kept a log or whateva. But I mean for the people who do like it or whateva I think it's cool or whateva.I think it's crazy that people can write about stuff they freena do and you only would know if you went on their blog site. But I do thgink it is good to have these sites cause it's good for people to have another way to express there selves. Also to be able to write freely always is a good thing.
I have found out that no matter how good you do at things, how good you look, or how good you are in general, how good you dress someone , somewhere will find something bad to say about you. No one can please everyone, so people should simply stop trying. One little thing can mess up everything. For some reason people just can't be happy for one another. People feel intimidated by someone elses gain. Jealousy and envy run the world. If everyone just can say something nice instead of always hating the world will be a better place.
Frozen Dreams
This is the title of the article I read on WIT(writers in touch). This website is basicly full of different writer's stories they posted. People can go and read some of them and you can also write your own. The have various contests that you can enter as long as you're a registered member. One of these stories caught my attention while I was glancing down the list of articles. I liked how the author made the dream come to reality. It had a very creative twist to it and the setting was out-of-this-world. Some of the descriptions he added set up a clear vision of where the characters were located. The location seemed to be in a cave with a monster that wants to kill this unidentified boy. This boy in her dreams seems like the hero that rescues her from this creature they encounter. The one part of of this story that I thought was completely crazy was when the girl realized that the dream so real. No names were mentioned because of the third-person narrative which made it kind of annoying hearing she and he over and over again. Toward the end of the story I was confused about the part where she was taking money from a mysterious man that was in the parking lot. Later I just guessed that she had some type of sickness and she didn't want to deal with the pain. I came to the conclusion that the pain was coming from home because of her parents fighting. She was under so much stress that she had to go out and that is where this dream she was having caught up to her. She was trapped and there was no way out and the boy was nowhere to be found. This particular story was interesting to me because it was horror and this attracts my attention anyways.
Today I didn't have to do much in my classes. I have to say that my school day has gone by mighty fast. Now the only class I have to go to is Food and Nutrition. That's the class where I cook in. Anyway, when I leave from that class, I getting on my bus and going straight home. When I get there I'm going to work. Once I leave from there I'll be heading straight to the mall. I'm going to get something from American Eagle or Famous. Once I leave from there I'm going to go home and get ready for the next day. That's how I plan for my day to go.
Lately alotof thing have been going so I haven't been up to date with any thing in the entertainment business. My aunt died from a brain tumor that she didin't even know about. I have a question how the doctor's don't know if you have a brain tumor or not. I mean she went in and told them that she was having reoccurring headaches. And they told her it's nothing. Then my daddy had fell through a roof and broke his hip from trying to be a cable guy. But that's sort of what he get's. Then my lil cousin got shot in the leg and it's the seventh time he been shot. Then my lil niece couldn't breathe and I was so scared. It was the first time I had cried in two years from when my big brother died so i'll have to get back kwith you on music and moovies.
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